#5, Pg. 21 | Steal Your Clothes

#5, Pg. 21 | Steal Your Clothes

November 5, 2014 in Issue 5
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Caley Tibbittz Collopy 8th Oct 2014, 7:49 AM edit delete
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A new story page? WTF?!?!?!?

NOTE:
For clarity's sake, here's a reminder that Kathryn can "will" her ring to her, and that she can make her armor appear again while wearing it.

(With as much as two months between new pages, I can't expect everyone to remember all this.)

When this gets colored, Kathryn's eyes will be glowing in panel 4 to match the ring's glow in panel 5 as it flies toward her, which will (hopefully) tie the actions together better.

...I got sick of doing flats and lineart corrections and dialogue corrections* for issue #1, so I decided to finish this. I started it on 08/07, but left it sitting at the blue pencil breakdown stage for a while while doing the aforementioned drudge work.

(*Smiley now has a bunch of new and altered dialogue on page 12 of issue #1. Exciting, right? You should totes check it out. TOTES.)

I also basically rewrote page 23 of issue #1:

I've now spent probably literally a full 24-hour day on the various attempts to nail this very important page. Including about 10 hours between today and yesterday. Every adjustment demanded several more adjustments. It was brutal. But I finally broke Kathryn's dialogue down from flowery to raw. It was prose, it was written, it was a fake iteration of a real emotion -- and then it broke apart, and her list of people she misses was inside all along.
#WRITERDOUCHE

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Comments:

Caley Tibbittz Collopy 8th Oct 2014, 7:50 AM edit delete reply
Caley Tibbittz Collopy
Thanks. This ended up being one of my favorites so far, which I didn't expect at the outset. If I gave myself 2 months to fine tune every page... well, I'd lose more readers than it would be worth. :)
ProfEtheric 8th Oct 2014, 8:00 AM edit delete reply
ProfEtheric
In the immortal words of the King of Comics, "done is better than perfect."
Caley Tibbittz Collopy 8th Oct 2014, 8:49 AM edit delete reply
Caley Tibbittz Collopy
Amen. I'm at the point where I need to figure out a reasonable way to pare down my style a bit. Things are getting too complex and flowery in regard to rendering. And, while I'm pretty happy with this composition, I'm overthinking the composition stage, which is also slowing me down.

I don't want to streamline to Kirby levels, but I do need to streamline.
dpat57 8th Oct 2014, 8:02 AM edit delete reply
dpat57
Thanks, your comment on your own update in the newest page thread helped explain things, too! :) Also appreciate your comment on my unworthy drek of a comic.
DizzasterJuice 8th Oct 2014, 8:13 AM edit delete reply
DizzasterJuice
I'm a bit confused too, but yeah, beautiful page.
Caley Tibbittz Collopy 8th Oct 2014, 8:47 AM edit delete reply
Caley Tibbittz Collopy
I added a note to my Author Note with links to previous examples of how Kathryn's ring works.
Matt Knab 8th Oct 2014, 11:51 AM edit delete reply
Matt Knab
Lots of awesome on this page. Silhouettes are a nice touch. Can't tell if that deflection was off or perfect. ;)
Caley Tibbittz Collopy 8th Oct 2014, 2:09 PM edit delete reply
Caley Tibbittz Collopy
Thanks. And, deflection of the bullet? Pure instinct and muscle memory --

-- but she's only thinking of herself on this page, ricocheting all willy-nilly and threatening to steal Erica's pants. Even when she breaks her "chains" and stands tall as a proud hero, she's still getting it wrong (a fact that's about to hit her on the next page).
Centcomm 8th Oct 2014, 12:08 PM edit delete reply
Centcomm
very nice page ! great art as always !!
Caley Tibbittz Collopy 8th Oct 2014, 2:11 PM edit delete reply
Caley Tibbittz Collopy
Thanks! I became a crosshatch man for no reason here.

I'm pretty proud of Jack's face -- it's the most quietly human he's gotten thus far.
jamie59 8th Oct 2014, 5:03 PM edit delete reply
jamie59
Nice deflect! Damn she's fast.
Caley Tibbittz Collopy 12th Oct 2014, 2:31 PM edit delete reply
Caley Tibbittz Collopy
Almost... TOO fast?

Dun-dun-DUUUNH!

...there's more to Kathryn than she even knows. The insane reflexes, the glowing eyes... these aren't things all the other immortals have.